P802.16 D4 Sponsor Ballot Recirculation Comment Resolution Report

Roger Marks

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2001/10/08 802.16-01/510000166Document under Review: P802.16/D4 Ballot Number:Comment DateStanley Wang MemberComment # 150 Comment submitted by:Comment Type Editorial Starting Page # 35 Starting Line # 46 Section 3Typo.Suggested RemedyChange "a upink" to "an uplink"Make the same change for Page 78 Line 64 and Page 133 Line 3.Proposed Resolution Recommendation: Recommendation byReason for RecommendationResolution of Group Decision of Group:Reason for Group's Decision/ResolutionGroup's NotesGroup's Action ItemsEditor's Notes Editor's ActionsEditor's Questions and ConcernsEditor's Action Items2001/10/08 802.16-01/510000166Document under Review: P802.16/D4 Ballot Number:Comment DateStanley Wang MemberComment # 151 Comment submitted by:Comment Type Editorial Starting Page # 36 Starting Line # 56 Section 4Typo.Suggested RemedyRemove ")" from the abbreviation.Proposed Resolution Recommendation: Recommendation byReason for RecommendationResolution of Group Decision of Group:Reason for Group's Decision/ResolutionGroup's NotesGroup's Action ItemsEditor's Notes Editor's ActionsEditor's Questions and ConcernsEditor's Action Items2001/10/08 802.16-01/510000166Document under Review: P802.16/D4 Ballot Number:Comment DateStanley Wang MemberComment # 152 Comment submitted by:Comment Type Editorial Starting Page # 70 Starting Line # 32 Section 6.2.2.2.1ClaritySuggested RemedyPage 70, line 32, Change the title of Table 7 to read ...

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• Publié par: Viwyung
• Nombre de lectures: 19
• Langue: English

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